EFN final part 2

Again, bad quality. IT ONLY GETS WORSE FROM HERE. Seriously, the next parts will only be sketches. If I have time I'll line them and update it. I want to get the story done as soon as I can and THEN I can pretty it up.

This is to compete against 's entry (which has her second page up! Go read it!)

AHHHH I'M GOING TO LOSE BUT THIS IS GOING TO BE EPIC AHHH.